Yesterday newsletter reader and U13 AAA-level coach Connor Cadaret shared with me the draft of an article he wrote. He was disappointed to not have received a response when he sent it to a coaching-oriented site and wanted my feedback on what to improve.
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“I like it,” I replied. “But what would you cut to reduce its length by half?”
Connor sent a shorter v…
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